So I gave it a listen 11am here.
The mix floads very nicely.
It gets better and better, the begining maybe a bit too long, but as I said its 11am I probably feel different about it this evening.
Don't say - I am also not 100% with the chill intro and outro -
I am getting confused why did you do it this way if you don't feel it?
Is it just because somebody told you they don't like it, now you also think you don't like it?
One tip: Stand 100% behind your work!
I like both the intro ( maybe a bit too long) and specialy the outro. Its a perfect ending with a great track.