Hm.. thinking of my comment could be complete
I took some listens of the track (like couplea dozens) and it looks really great. Analytically, it`s a standart track, but the nice sounds, riffs make it a splendid one. Its not really disjointed, maybe there could be just slightly better structure.
The secondary riff is cool, it makes for the atmosphere, the vocal part at the beginning sounds tasty as well. Delivers ominous soundscape, that is terrific.