Ok, I checked it out..
..and I really liked it.
So heres a short review:
The bass is _a bit_ too distorted, it could be better for production if it were slightly smoother...
And after the start the more original sounding bassline is replaced by a full-on sounding bass, which I personally like less...
The pad/layer first introduced around the 2nd minute could use some more work, it sounds _a bit_ dull at the moment, but it has potential.
What I like in the track:
It's powerful, energetic and evolving.
The effects are great and the acid line tweaking is very psyberdelic.
The speech sample (from space oddysey?) has been fit in perfectly.
The highhats are tight. I have a soft spot on highhats that are not formularic and the snare is very fitting.. subtle, but doing its job.
Also the bass key changes are nice, although ,as I said, not full-on basslien would be better and added more to the atmosphere.
and finally... the kick was verry juicy =)
About the end of the world... It's not that dark, but I'm glad it isn't
Anyway...
Great track, I would give 7/10 (and this is being quite harsh.)
Good luck on future work, I'll check them out from now on..
PS. What did you use to make this track?