Cybernetika
your sounds and atmospheres are definitely good, but the base of the song - the bassline - is just too boring. It ads sort of flat impression to the whole thing. I suggest you change the main bass loop (the second one is fine) to something a little bit melodic and varied. Also try playing with Vanguard gator for a different groove to it. In the short beatless section in the middle of the song, I can imagine some simple, but weird or almost horror theme in high tones with some spooky sample (maybe from albino synth sounds / trance chords, pitched up). I also have an idea of building up the dark tension towards the end of the track and then collapse it into a short ambient chaos.
I don't know how much invention do you want to add to the remix. These are just some ideas that popped up while listening
I see you are into dark, raw sounds. Do you know Flint Glass? May be something for you