HI,
first. nice track !
the baseline sounds warm and voluminous.
the layers are well seperated and everything is well controlled.
maybe have a look at the hi hats again. there are nearly no variations.
the melodies are well played, but the melodie sounds are not spectacular.
the buildup is well. i came into it very well. would be nice if the track would have a slightly stronger climax.
all over all, nice sound quality, nice builtup, not so much variations.