I've listened to it now. You've got the mixing really well (although I'd prefer the bass more to the centre). The melody you've got going with the bassline in the beginning (until 1:46) is really annoying. I'd rather have it play the same note repeatedly than that basic melody. Alternatively, you can add some fill-ins to make it interesting.
The melody that comes in makes it clear either that 1. You've got no musical education, or 2. You're going for a dark, weird atmosphere. Possibly both.
The track progresses nicely after that, with some harmonic content that actually feels like a bit more than filler (uncommon for psytrance in general); it's almost got something to tell me. Nice.
I think this track has the potential to become a good one, if you keep building on that chord progression you've got running near the end.