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Oktave

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  1. Thank you for this. Indeed, the track has points to be improved. I am very thankfull for your appreciation. To be honest I had this track stopped for some months, I really would like to have it released more polished and refined. You are right about the arrangement, I really did not know very well how to arrange the different parts, but I felt compelled to move forward. I think the ending has a lot to improve too. This was my first track in Cubase. I am now looking forward to make progressive, but I still have to improve my mastering/mixing skills, sometimes I just do n
  2. Hello there, I would like some feedback on this track: Thanks!
  3. Allright, good feedback here Thank you for the technicalities! That is exactly what I am looking for
  4. Hello there! Posting this latest track for comments, feedback & review I am still in doubt about the final mix/mastering stage, tell me what you think about it
  5. Captivating intro. Mysterious, melodic and deep. 0:27 what a great f** sound & cool reverb trick. 0:51 awesome kick, diferente in na interesting way 1:18 nice fxs 1:43 inteligente marimbas 2:15 nice drive 2:46 clever reverb sound 3:08 that massive distorted sound is so fuctup that even being so fuctup it sounds good in the contexto of the song. 4:22 that organic violin sound/progression fits so well in the contexto of such chaotic mess 5:48 maybe my favourite part, nice work! This is a very interesting type of musical concept. You de
  6. The intro needs rework, poor eq (altough that dark texture may be the intended result, it sounds hidden, withouth presence, a bit muddy), altough the fact that it is melodic gets extra points. That tye of constant repetitive non-dynamic bassline wrecks the music, why not use velocity? sidechain? And the bass is too loud in comparison to the rest of the mix (maybe this is the intended, personally it sounds too much (was this track made on headphones? or were a proper monitoring system used?) The kick is not bad 0:33 > The voices are unclear, unperceptible, confused (again poor eq
  7. Ok! It´s your track! I´m glad if my comments were of any help, hope not being to harsh, sometimes we may think we have something great (which in reallity may be in comparison to where we were before), but it´s behind the scenes in comparison to the big Picture. None the less, I prefer directness when asking or giving feedback because in my point of view it is the best way to improve. Again, it is only an opinion
  8. Hi there everybody, thank you all for this opportunity to share. I´m working on this track and would be very grateful if you could feedback on it. Thank you! https://soundcloud.com/myrtillus_pt/myrtillus-h-n-y
  9. Hi, you have to improve your intro, too much simple, you can input more fx's and use some more melodic sequences in it. Your leads sound like general midi You could research more into sound design. Your bass sounds weird, your kick is not tuned to the bass. >Your percussions high frequencies are too high > the offbeat hats sound like hidden in the back >There is a clear lack of dimension in your track, with this I mean the sounds are all in the middle of the stereo field, dig more into stereo imaging, use panning. > most sounds are somewhat "dead", they don´t hav
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