the bassline is hard on the brain man,it doesnt let you enjoy the track.
maybe try to make it less of 16th bass line?it will be easier to appreciate the other aspects of the track,right now all i hear is a bomobombombombombom
everything else is just backgound
.pads and fx's are nice,but the bassline is killing it.at around 2.50min it gets better than the start of the track.
thats MY opinion though,and i dont listen to a lot of dark psy .am more in the melodic goa side of trance!
but the track has a nice atmospheric touch to it,quite gloomy.
if i were you i d do somethin about the bassline
btw i dont make music,i only listen to it.