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Well i say louder my opinion, your track needs work and it is too long.

i sleep when i listen to your tune.

i don t like.

- you must to make something with more FX and try

to POWER YOUR ENTIRE TRACK !!!!

change all your sounds.

change your track.

WORK !!!!!!!!

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ok thanks for your respect... i respect you too my friend.

But it s only my opinion it s like choice and colors... i like the blue ? maybe not you :)

 

i listen trance since 1995 with at the begining "SFX" X-dream... and many more.

 

well for me, the trance music must be power and hypnotizing...

i think there are a pb about mix in your track ...

 

-why so long ?

-do you make long because the trance style must be long?

overall it s empty bass+kick ? you can add more things .. pads strings and lot of FX ...

you have some good ideas but work more yours sounds and riffs.

i think you make better.

 

listen "Ethereal"... you can be inspired.

 

see you soon !!!

B)

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I somehow agree with the shaman.

The sound quality can be improved, especially the bass.

The track is too long : some parts of it are unnecessary. I know how it is : you find some nice melodies and don' want to delete them, but the "4.00 - 6.00" part don't bring much to the track.

you must to make something with more FX and try

I also agree with that.

Now things that i really liked : the intro and the last tree minutes.

 

One last thing : people always critisize more the tracks they like the most ;)

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i guees it is indeed a matter of taste.but as a matter of fact i have listened to more plain goaish tracks that are really loved out there.in fact the track has almost its entire duration at least 5 colours of sound playing.i guess that because it is unmastered one can not easily notice them.the track also is far more complicated than most today's productions(no offense and it not de facto a better thing)

 

i don't think that i will add anything to the track cause that was the final intention.of course the sound needs a bit tweaking.

thanks for the feedback and keep it up!

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