I'm not a fan too much of full on, only if it's done right, and still not so much. With that said, I believe it is OK for what it is. I wish I could have something constructive to say. Maybe a heavier kick? I couldn't hear too much in clarity because the track volume is so low, or compressed as you said.
So, good effort, keep at it. Clarify for me, which sub genre is this? I'm assuming there isn't to be much melody in these types of tracks. More of a keep on truckin through the night stuff.