Spaceship - Goa Trance track work in progress

[CosmicEquilibrium]

This was done only using Reaper DAW and Vital, some constructive suggestions and opinions are welcome  

 

[Wamphyri]

Hiya!

Kick sounds quite weak to me. Instead of that one, I'd go for a 909 bassdrum kick straightaway.

I think there's no compression, no busses or master are compressed at all.

That bassline would be better with a short (around half second to 900 ms) mid-high reverb.

Use cutoff to make sound flow. Using an LFO synchronized to the BPM (try with 4 bars or 8 bars). Then, adjust that LFO to control the cutoff of some instruments. You can do this on some of the ones you have already (have a try) or add some 303 acidline on some parts of the track to make it more trippy. Try another sound instead of that kind of chime sound you used (starting on 0:41). It has some cutoff movement, but after all, still thinking it does not fit on the track.

Use sidechain from bassdrum kick onto the bassline to make them flow together.

Hihats are not sharp enogh, you can barely listen to them. Use some reverb or delay on them (hi-pass filter on those effects).

On 3:40 there's a swoosh starting on the track and keeping on for a while. Try some reverb or space widener on them, play with the knobs of the effect like trying to make it wider and then, when things get calmer, get it back to the center, where it is now.

Hope all these suggestiongs help you! Good luck! 😊

[CosmicEquilibrium]

You are right :), I'm no longer working on this track, I will use only synth1 instead, it is enough for what I want to do for now, but will take in consideration your constructive  suggestions.

I will share here the track I'm working on later, it will not be very sophisticated and will be simple but will be goa trance.