first of all i hate rapidshare it really suxx i prefer yousendit or speedyshare...
very big file hope the quality is such a big but if not , dont make 320 kbs mp3 it wont help nothing did you mastered it or sth ?? i didnt heard it yet it is just downloading
but now it downloaded so listen my review
very nice begining very pumping
give this lead a little more decibels coz it disapears in this bass...the melody from 2:00 is a housy thing....the song has too litlle dynamics , hope it will be better later (it is your first song:) and it sounds such,looped motifs, i dont hear any fx on synths...try to make something like this :
put 3 times a loop which is plaing and in the 4 time a variation of it , shorter or longer...
when i listen it more it sounds very funny and creepy there are a motifs combined with them,played on the same synths all the time quite boring 8 minutes im on 5 right now...
ok...few advices...if you cant now make varioous melodies try to play one melody by few instruments, with a little changes each time on each intrument...
very funny stuff keep rolin and it will be souind better, and dont finish songs when you cant try to make as many new projects as possible time will let you finish one