Firstly, thanks for taking the time to have a listen.
Secondly, the sound quality is not soundcloud's fault...it is me! I am new to making my own tracks, and I've definitely been humbled by how difficult it is to produce a polished track. I'm kind of teaching my self all of this stuff, by perusing internet forums like this, so it's a work in progress. In some ways I think I'm a lot better at hearing in my head what I want the track to be, and composing, but the producing and sound design is the most difficult for me. I've gotten similar feedback about EQ-ing and mix-downs from soundcloud users.
Anyways, I'll keep it up and see if I can get some more stuff uploaded in the not too-distant future. Probably need to do more A-Bing between a pro track, and one of my projects.