Hi mate,
Just gave your track a listen...
What I liked.
Some good samples in there, well cut and well used.
It's definitely got the dark psy sound you're trying to make
Bassline sounded pretty thick on my headphones
What I think needs improving...
Needs more variation in the bassline(s)
It needs some more melodic elements to work with those basslines
Some pads in there would add some air and depth
It needs a narrative, a story, something to tie it all together.
I hope this was some useful feedback for you.
Making tracks can be very discouraging at first, but practice makes perfect
Keep up the good work.