Forgotten Temple

[shurita]

Long intro ahead =D

I'm still learning the basics. What do you think?

 

https://soundcloud.com/arkohn/forgotten-temple

[antic604]

Really good! I LOVED the intro, as well as the space you create when the beat kicks in - all the small effects & melodic hooks are really well placed. Don't like the 1st bass sample, though - it somehow holds it back, like the attack is too long maybe? The one that appears at around 4:00 is better. The bee / singing at around 4:35 is incredible, really creative and surprising - wish the melody evolved further.

[shurita]

Really good! I LOVED the intro, as well as the space you create when the beat kicks in - all the small effects & melodic hooks are really well placed. Don't like the 1st bass sample, though - it somehow holds it back, like the attack is too long maybe? The one that appears at around 4:00 is better. The bee / singing at around 4:35 is incredible, really creative and surprising - wish the melody evolved further.

Thank you antic =D

I'm very glad that you enjoyed this one. This one took a lot of trial and error until the interesting parts started to show up. The concept behind this one is a mystic, hooded wise man, is wandering in a sand storm and finds a hidden temple. He opens the gates and enters and at that very moment the kick drops in and his minds starts to travel through other dimensions where he encounters and has dialogues with other entities. =D

I'm taking notes on the first bass and further evolving the offbeat melody. I find it difficult to reach that sweet spot where the melody is well developed but not too long where it starts to bore.

Thank you for your feedback!