buzzman Posted May 29, 2008 Share Posted May 29, 2008 Hey Psynews, can you give me some honest feedback on a new track im working on? Thanks in advance! LISTEN HERE (192kbs) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
frosty Posted May 29, 2008 Share Posted May 29, 2008 hay not bad. nice n proggie. maybe take some of the high crunch sound out of the kick at the start. just so its not so loud let in sit in the music more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
buzzman Posted May 30, 2008 Author Share Posted May 30, 2008 hay not bad. nice n proggie. maybe take some of the high crunch sound out of the kick at the start. just so its not so loud let in sit in the music more.Thanks for your reply Do you mean the kick should be flattened out a bit? or i should filter it down in the beginning? Maybe the last would do so it is not right on from start.. Thanks dude, i try to put it in Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
frosty Posted May 30, 2008 Share Posted May 30, 2008 Thanks for your reply Do you mean the kick should be flattened out a bit? or i should filter it down in the beginning? Maybe the last would do so it is not right on from start.. Thanks dude, i try to put it in if you listern to the end part of your track the kick fits in nicly with it. just at the start its to "out there" i think flatern it a bit but try to filter it down. if that make sence. ive been listerning to simply wave alot of late. the composing behind there tracks is amazing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Syko Posted May 30, 2008 Share Posted May 30, 2008 Thats a very decent track mate. I like the way it progresses and sounds. It works well as a track. Keep up the good work! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
buzzman Posted May 30, 2008 Author Share Posted May 30, 2008 if you listern to the end part of your track the kick fits in nicly with it. just at the start its to "out there" i think flatern it a bit but try to filter it down. if that make sence. ive been listerning to simply wave alot of late. the composing behind there tracks is amazing.It makes perfect sense Thanks for the tip bro! And thanks for the kind words people... Im glad you like it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supergroover Posted May 30, 2008 Share Posted May 30, 2008 make the volume of the snare a little higher or add another snare on top of this one to add some attack to the sound. that way it ll be a little snappier and groovier. I would also give some of the spacious growls and twists a little more volume. but just a little. Or just lower the kick and bass a little bit. When you use alot of reverbed and delayed sounds it can help to take the reverb seperately from the other sound and eq the low out of it. This will clean up the mix and make it sound tighter. also the break is quite long and without any rhythm at all. this will kill a dancefloor. Unless it is really intended.. Adding a lowpassed kick or some rhythm will keep people going a little. adding a lowpassed kick at the beginning of the break will also make the break sound more logical. The second part of the track doesnt really come back anymore. You make a break and you start again after the break but it get very active anymore while it should imho. Try to make the second part rock as well! People will expect this. Overal nice vibe! nice sounds! Maybe make the melodies a little more upfront to make it a little catchier. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
buzzman Posted May 30, 2008 Author Share Posted May 30, 2008 make the volume of the snare a little higher or add another snare on top of this one to add some attack to the sound. that way it ll be a little snappier and groovier. I would also give some of the spacious growls and twists a little more volume. but just a little. Or just lower the kick and bass a little bit. When you use alot of reverbed and delayed sounds it can help to take the reverb seperately from the other sound and eq the low out of it. This will clean up the mix and make it sound tighter. also the break is quite long and without any rhythm at all. this will kill a dancefloor. Unless it is really intended.. Adding a lowpassed kick or some rhythm will keep people going a little. adding a lowpassed kick at the beginning of the break will also make the break sound more logical. The second part of the track doesnt really come back anymore. You make a break and you start again after the break but it get very active anymore while it should imho. Try to make the second part rock as well! People will expect this. Overal nice vibe! nice sounds! Maybe make the melodies a little more upfront to make it a little catchier. Thanks dude, just the reply i was looking for This should give me something to work with! I will try to make it better, and post the updated version soon Thanks again Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drekmajster Posted May 30, 2008 Share Posted May 30, 2008 I kinda like the fact that the growls and other sounds aren't that loud, it gives it a spaced out feel. I also like the break. Btw I'd make the stuff after the break progress a bit further if I were you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
buzzman Posted May 30, 2008 Author Share Posted May 30, 2008 I kinda like the fact that the growls and other sounds aren't that loud, it gives it a spaced out feel. I also like the break. Btw I'd make the stuff after the break progress a bit further if I were you.Thank you for your reply But Yeah, im very satisfied with the growling synths to But i was thinking about progressing the track maybe 2 minutes longer, try to build it a little further in the end! Is that what you mean? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drekmajster Posted May 30, 2008 Share Posted May 30, 2008 Yup, that's what I meant. It just ends too soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheCreamFilling Posted June 3, 2008 Share Posted June 3, 2008 music aspect: jeeze...this track is beautiful. so simple. I like the environment you created. :- O production aspect: damn this is so clean. it sounds very high quality. I just started making music and I use fl studio, but I don't know how to make my music sound so full. what do you use to make music? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
buzzman Posted June 3, 2008 Author Share Posted June 3, 2008 music aspect: jeeze...this track is beautiful. so simple. I like the environment you created. :- O production aspect: damn this is so clean. it sounds very high quality. I just started making music and I use fl studio, but I don't know how to make my music sound so full. what do you use to make music? Thanks, glad you like it I use cubase sx3.. with all kinds of vst plugins... For synths Albino3 and vanguard is my favorites.. And just got the sonnox eq, verb ect. wich i think is great also Download the Andi Wax mixing secret tutorial and learn about eq'ing and stuff... It takes you through the basics Hes speaking english with accent though, so maybe you'll have a hard time completely understanding what he says, butyou can learn alot here Otherwise look around in the pinned topics in the music making section here on psynews, you can find alot of good "how to's" Good luck with the production Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caffein:me Posted June 3, 2008 Share Posted June 3, 2008 Hey Psynews, can you give me some honest feedback on a new track im working on? Thanks in advance! LISTEN HERE (192kbs) needs more cowbell XD I dont know why but this track reminds me of a GMS one, perhaps the samples... Which did you use? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
buzzman Posted June 3, 2008 Author Share Posted June 3, 2008 needs more cowbell XDDamnit, i knew something was missing I dont know why but this track reminds me of a GMS one, perhaps the samples... Which did you use?Samples? Only samples i used is the voice samples in the beginning and the one in the break, the rest is home made The first samples in the beginning of the track, i have sampled from the movie: Anchorman:Legend of Ron Burgundy One of the funniest movies i have ever seen btw Don't think GMS have used the same??? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plasma Force Posted August 1, 2008 Share Posted August 1, 2008 I Like It Just The Way It Is, Ya Can't Be Too Picky Chhers Buzzman, Keep It Up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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