Guest Posted September 19, 2005 Share Posted September 19, 2005 http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=408031 Go Have a listen and tell me what you think.I appricate any constructive criticisims Thanks Tryp Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted September 19, 2005 Share Posted September 19, 2005 Commenting as I listen: The intro is slik, the vox I dig alot (some nasa 50+ official . Sporadic synth hits sometimes too simple. Groove startin at 1.19 is cool too, snare is a bit too loud( even for nite) . breaks are alrite but I get no substantial changes after breaks. You reached the peak in the song pretty soon, but drove it all the way to the end of track. I dig the gated synth lines in the background. After almost 4.00 I felt bored.Barely new elements(stories) introduced. Good overall production and leveling. Nice dude, keep up the tune. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N.I.V.R.A. Posted September 20, 2005 Share Posted September 20, 2005 great intro , your sound is good but you need some variation in your song and you miss a minute....it is a great start,keep on working.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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