ritual om Posted July 22, 2005 Share Posted July 22, 2005 what lies beneath-bringing back the madness->this is my last track and probably my best track. you can download it in this link: http://www.ic-musicmedia.com/artist_pages/...e.php?id=102661 the track is unmastered. i would definitely like some feedback! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cybernetika Posted July 23, 2005 Share Posted July 23, 2005 Hey, nice tune you got there. Good atmosphere buildup. I personally think you got some elements distorting a little and some hurting a bit in the ear but since you said its unmastered its ok. I suggest you use a limiter then. The psychedelic factor is very high, especially towards the end, I love that In the beginning the whole mix sounds a bit empty. You should try backing it all up with more percussive elements. Maybe some pitch swirling FX or something like that. Furthermore, the bass needs to be a bit more present in my opinion. Oh, and you should clearly improve your hihat samples by layering them with each other so that they sound 'fuller'. Anyway, enough criticism, I really like the track, great acidlines and layering... I agree that this is your best track. Get it mastered properly Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ritual om Posted July 23, 2005 Author Share Posted July 23, 2005 thanks for the ideas mate!the hihats are a bit weak-sounding but don't forget that this is 128;) the beggining is deliberately a bit empty in order to appear the track more explosive.i'll try to work it out however! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ritual om Posted July 24, 2005 Author Share Posted July 24, 2005 come on!let's show some enthusiasm here! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daze Posted July 24, 2005 Share Posted July 24, 2005 I like the intro, it sets a nice mood for the rest of the song. As Cybernetika said though, some elements are a bit distorted, for example the kick sounds a bit low-quality. The Acidlines though are indeed great, love 'em The melodies around 16.10 and 18.30 sound a bit offbeat... I would move the notes around just a little bit. I think some atmospheric effects for example in the start would do very well, especially when only the kick and bass are playing. Overall a nice track though, keep it up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ritual om Posted July 25, 2005 Author Share Posted July 25, 2005 get down to business guyssssss Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manuser Posted July 26, 2005 Share Posted July 26, 2005 yep definitely nice track, even if at some moments the acidlines sound too loud and strident, but u know it already and u will improve that, otherwise it is a good track. twisted PS don't think there is a little problem with the sound at about 6.15? PPS your track got charisma Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deepdrone Posted July 27, 2005 Share Posted July 27, 2005 A bit too mad? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ritual om Posted July 27, 2005 Author Share Posted July 27, 2005 A bit too mad? 303857[/snapback] what do you mean by that? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ritual om Posted July 29, 2005 Author Share Posted July 29, 2005 give me more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ritual om Posted July 31, 2005 Author Share Posted July 31, 2005 just a little bit more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xamanist Posted August 3, 2005 Share Posted August 3, 2005 just a little bit more 305825[/snapback] take a LOT more: great track man, i like it a lot! Spiritual vibes all over, trippy leads and suprising story, with an intense ending, very good indeed i'll listen to the other track now to see if it can match this one boom best of luck Serguei :: Swan X-1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ritual om Posted August 5, 2005 Author Share Posted August 5, 2005 thank you a lot my friend for the good words.gives me inspiration for the future Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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